Friday, 27 September 2019

No safe harbour.

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The terrifying ferry listing slowly.
The gloomy water swaying loudly.
My dark lifeboat floating terrifying.
One fighting ship tipping quickly. 

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  1. Anonymous27 September 2019 at 10:01

    You sentences are all good but instead of using tipping you could use listing.

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